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-The Entity Metadata Management API is intended to establish a consistent pattern that supports Entity Metadata Providers sharing changes to their curated entities and their metadata with the community of Entity Metadata Consumers (e.g. libraries, museums, archives). Use of a consistent pattern allows for the creation of software tools for producing and consuming changes in entity metadata.
+The Entity Metadata Management API is intended to establish a consistent pattern that supports Entity Metadata Providers sharing changes to curated entities and their metadata with the community of Entity Metadata Consumers (e.g. libraries, museums, archives). Use of a consistent pattern allows for the creation of software tools for producing and consuming changes in entity metadata.
 
 This specification is based on the [Activity Streams 2.0 specification][org-w3c-activitystreams]. It defines a usage pattern and minor extensions specific to entity metadata management.